Descriptive writing paints a picture in the reader's mind. Marks come from precise word choice, varied techniques, and controlled structure — not from writing more.
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What descriptive writing is for
The goal is to create a vivid, single impression — a mood or atmosphere the reader feels.
You are assessed on content and structure, and on accurate, varied vocabulary and sentences.
Show, don't tell: reveal a feeling through detail rather than naming it ('her hands shook' beats 'she was scared').
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1. Which sentence best 'shows' fear rather than 'telling' it?
2. What is the main effect of using short sentences in descriptive writing?
3. Which is an example of personification?
4. A description will usually score higher if it…
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